POETRY AND SOUND

The cadence of poetry is much like the meter and rhythm of music. Many poetic devices, such as alliteration, where repetition and pattern of sound engage the listener, can be used to enhance an image or mood that you create with your poem. While there are hundreds of books and courses devoted to the concept of sound in poetry, I want to encourage you to learn more by describing some ways that I use sound in my poems.

For starters, consider literally describing sound in your poems. Begin by paying attention to familiar day (and night) sounds. What images and emotions come to mind when you hear car horns and people in a busy intersection, as opposed to wind gathering in the distance, or rain pounding on a tin roof? What happens creatively when you can feel sound, as you do when you hear drumming or the bass pounding of a car radio? Close your eyes and tune into the sounds around you; a creaking floor, warm air forced through a heater vent, a squawking jay, or the hoot of an owl.

This January, an unusually heavy snow brought me the sound of winter silence. Quiet provides the opportunity to write about its opposite – a burst of doves in a snowy field, for example.

Here’s a quick line incorporating description of sound to prompt emotion:

 

    Metal wheels on track clatter and creak, what was comfort in childhood

       vanishes as the train disappears into rain and darkness...

 

How many ways can you interpret that line? A last good-bye? Impending tragedy?

Back for a moment to music and poetry. Rhythm and rhyme in verse stretches from “roses are red” to Slam and Performance Poetry (Katie Makkai, Joshua Bennett) to Shakespeare’s sonnets and the poetry of E.E. Cummings. For now, try to ensure your reader feels the rhythm of your words. Explore different poetry forms that serve to enhance rhythm and sound. Here’s an example from a pantoum I wrote about hurricane Ophelia. These lines both literally describe sound and in the context of the form build momentum, suspense, and power:

 

    “Gulls, crabs, and people go to hiding places, wind that once walked in breaks down doors,

         cap and show mix in with planks and plastic, waves pound in carried by the storm...”

 

I’ll close with an important note – read your poem drafts aloud. Do this so you can hear what your poem sounds like. I’m betting on a first reading you’ll hear awkward phrases and find better wording. Reading your poetry aloud is one of the best ways to ensure you lift and carry the reader along with the sound of your words.

Be sure and check out this month’s “You Might Like...” as I’ve included links to more information on poetry and sound.

 

Happy (creative!) New Year!

BEGINNING YOUR ARTISTIC ADVENTURE

More often than not, when I encourage someone to express themselves through art, the first three words I hear are, “Oh, I can’t write / paint / sculpt / dance / play music…” 

Why is “can’t” your impulsive reply? Perhaps because it’s hard to live in today’s world without hearing about someone who is the “best in the school / country / world / universe / wherever” at what she does. We live in a world where almost every moment is spent striving for excellence. With school, sports, friends, or work the pressure to excel is enormous. No wonder it’s easy to compare ourselves to everyone else while conveniently forgetting your most fundamental truth: They are not You. 

Here’s what I suggest: Recognize you are unique. Only one of You exists on the planet at this moment. Your experience and artistry are yours alone. What matters is that you bring your art into the world in whatever way you can, using whatever means you have. Even Beethoven’s 5th Symphony can be played using a Stradivarius or an instrument made from someone else’s trash (look up “The Recycled Orchestra”). But it is always Beethoven’s 5th.

Now back to writing, especially poetry: Begin by writing a word or two or three (via pen and paper, computer, or in your own creative way). The blank space is your canvas – you’re completely free to throw words on it – what you write doesn’t have to be linear across the page, form complete sentences, or make sense. Own that freedom!

Here’s a quick example:

“word.   elegant in its aloneness.  brave enough to appear even though

      sliding

                  down

                             the page

means    standing out     being different.   becoming Art.”

As you begin putting letters and words on a page, your inner muse (yes, you have one) will waken and help you bring your own creation into the world. Go for it, our world needs You and Your Art J.

MY WRITING COMMUNITY

Taking some time to reflect on all the creative people in my life gives rise to thoughts I’d like to share with you.  In the deepest depths of my soul I’m a poet. And there are muddy waters within that compel me to escape our world by living solo high on a New Mexico mesa, on a cliff open to the ravages of the sea or deep in the Appalachians. The short periods of time I’m able to do these things brings tremendous joy and creativity. I do my best writing when I am completely isolated and alone.

However… I also believe it is essential to build and celebrate a personal writing community. (Mine does actually include people, in addition to beloved trees, groundhogs, and clouds.) Yours too will include those who both nourish and support your work. Your community will grow with your art. In that process, you’ll have the opportunity to give back by supporting friends in their creative communities as well.

My creative community includes

•    Writers - friends on the writing path I absolutely trust with my work:

•    Poet sisters - my first and continuing group, my poet’s heart is safe with these women.

•    Memoir group - listening to amazing stories from brave people helps nourish my own stories.

•    Kid’s table - my newest group of incredibly creative friends in children’s literature.

•    Editor(s) - Any work I share is edited first, including poetry.

•    Others in the arts:

      •    Theatre - those who tirelessly work in theatre, especially community theatre.

      •    Documentary filmmakers - who bring another way of seeing the world into my life.

      •    Artists and musicians - all bring incredible richness of expression.

•    Friends in the sciences - they keep me grounded and curious.

 

There are other important members of your creative community who can help you take your art to a higher level and out into the world:

•    Mentors - You will find them and they will find you.

•    Connectors - People who help you meet others who are important to your work, including gifted creatives who can help you market your work, build your website, and introduce you to those interested in promoting and selling (yes, it happens!) your work.

•    Receivers - People who support the arts. Your audience: from people in your family, to fellow creatives, to people you don’t know but who want to connect with you at book signings and readings. (Yes, I believe in your potential to have those events!)

I’ve highlighted some of the members of my community here in my recommendations. I encourage you to build, nourish, and cherish your own writing community. Take a look at the people in your life and bring those who energize you creatively into a more immediate presence. They will help strengthen your gifts as you bring your own unique creative talents into our world.